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Fire dances here in my mind.

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Heartless Lover

Views (317) Pain Created on 9-25-07 Flag
Fire dances here in my mind.
Only to be put out by your cold look.
You leave me cold all the time why not warm me up?
Pulling me under, in all your lies.
Leaving me only to cry in this cold bed.
All alone in the darkness no one really wants me.
A flash of life and your gone to someone else.
Somewhere else leaving me forever.
My cold heartless lover.
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On February 19th 2008 jarnotti Said :
jarnotti dang thats really good i like it alot
On October 6th 2007 stics917 Said :
stics917 nice,you used few words and lost nothing :]
On October 6th 2007 XtranquillityX Said :
XtranquillityX well done!
On October 1st 2007 ynot4u2hold Said :
ynot4u2hold Wow. This is really good. There's alot of guys out there that are like that though and few that are not. Good luck in finding one that isn't. Just have patience and the one for you will come to you. Never give up your dreams and what matters to you. Keep up the great work. You have a knack for writing poetry keep up the excellent work.
On September 28th 2007 shellycuk Said :
shellycuk cool
On September 28th 2007 joabizz Said :
joabizz good!
On September 26th 2007 alexia66 Said :
alexia66 short but sweet is most of your peoms and i love them :P
On September 25th 2007 pru1989 Said :
pru1989 wow that is really good,