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Eyes like a violent diamond storm stare

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Dark Storm

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Eyes like a violent diamond storm stare back at me through the mirror.
Crystal raindrops fall down my windowsill.
Its as black as my hair outside.
Bright flashes of lighting hit the trees around me.
I can see you in the mirror behind me with your eyes that shine like the sun.
Death has come to take me in a storm as violent as my eyes.
I will now stay in a place as dark as my hair.
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On October 6th 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 wow that was awsome good job
On September 26th 2007 akrovaz Said :
akrovaz It has an eerie sort of tone to it...Excellent job! I like it!
On September 26th 2007 alexia66 Said :
alexia66 yea dark but good
On September 26th 2007 Emylinda Said :
Emylinda oooo, i like it. pretty.