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Lily’s grave
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Created on 9-25-07
I Breath Freedom
I rain Dust, a wish of stones
An angels love and passionate candle stands
My world is like a child in a park
His letter has Warmth I remember
His Flame of ice began to melt
At Lily’s grave
I rain Dust, a wish of stones
An angels love and passionate candle stands
My world is like a child in a park
His letter has Warmth I remember
His Flame of ice began to melt
At Lily’s grave
Please Login to post comments| On October 6th 2007 shellycuk Said : | |
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awesome
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| On September 26th 2007 joabizz Said : | |
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so far my favorite,, very good |
| On September 26th 2007 akrovaz Said : | |
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Great job! Short, & simple...simply amazing! |
| On September 26th 2007 alexia66 Said : | |
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i agree with California1516 this is really good |
| On September 25th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Wow...This is really beautiful... |
| On September 25th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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love it..so short..and simple..yet it gets the message across nicely |
