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My Poems
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My Life Is Over - My Suicide |
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Killing Me Killing You |
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You're To Blame |
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What Hell Really Is |
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Two Sides |
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Thoughts During Suicide |
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Missing Someone |
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Loving Yourself |
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My Self-Failure |
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Sultry Seraphim |
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Vampires Don’t Exist (A Dark Love) |
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Angel Of Death |
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Babies |
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Murder |
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Fallens |
My Suicide Letter
The feelings inside are burning me if feelings are what you would call them.
I'm not ok I tell everyone but they laugh in my face and tell me to die.
The darkness is here I feel the shadow over my soul and hope is gone.
I'm never going to belong I'm never going to be cared about so I know its over.
There is no one out there for me I'm all alone and its killing me its because of all you.
I'm lost and crying in side you wont help me because that would mean you cared.
My feelings burn and I know what’s going to happen I'm going to die.
Die because of you, all because of you, are you happy now its all over.
I'm not here anymore my life taken by my burning feelings and a small dagger.
Deep cuts down my arms its all your fault I'm dead some more then others.
My blood is warm no longer lying in a pool around me its over just like it was meant to be.
All alone and in darkness all to make you happy I just wanted to make you happy.
Note this was a real note so it's not really in poem format
Please Login to post comments| On October 10th 2007 freakytomboy Said: |
| wow. thats sad that ppl would make fun of someone to the point of death. ppl are mean but c'mon thats just cruel. |
| On October 6th 2007 shellycuk Said: |
| m8. thats really sad... hope you're ok now:) |
| On October 4th 2007 aFigment Said: |
| I'm feeling the same right now.
It may seem that no one cares. Like you are "A Figment" among others. But in reality, there is at least one person who believes in you. We don't realize that, because we shut ourselves in. You have to take all the grief, the rage, the elements that make up your tendencies and turn it into motivation to keep living. To break out of the cell and see that person that cares. For those that bring you down, keep in mind that they have a weakness. That weakness is our power. Their weakness is they fear death. One of my mottos is "How can one live, if one is afraid to die." Live for the moment. |
| On October 2nd 2007 Ssaasssssyyyyy Said: |
| wow this is exactly how I felt before I killed myself last Friday. Please don't kill yourself...that's sad. I had a friend that committed suicide and it was the hardest loss I have ever had to live through... |
| On September 27th 2007 a620m Said: |
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| On September 27th 2007 hellokitty453 Said: |
| At the moment life sucks |
| On September 27th 2007 thefuzzyman87 Said: |
| wether this is yours or not, wow, it's amazingly deep. My heart, I know everyone says this, but my heart goes out to you. There are people who you don't even know that care about you. When life seems it's worst, you must remember these people. There is nothing that you could have ever done to rightfully deserve to be forsaken like it seems you feel. It's not your fault, it's theirs for the unwillingness to understand. If you care to talk, just write me or something. I'm not in it because I feel pity, I'm in it because it would be the greatest feeling to know you were happy. That would make me happy. If all you want is to be happy, and you're as depressed as it seems, then what do you have to lose? |
| On September 26th 2007 Dogfaceone1 Said: |
| Bueatiful. |
| On September 26th 2007 joabizz Said: |
| wow, real?? I hope you got help |
| On September 26th 2007 alexia66 Said: |
| this is realyl good though sad , |
| On September 25th 2007 mikesbabymom1 Said: |
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| all i could think of is when i tried to commit suicide so it was great i could feel your pain |
| On September 25th 2007 pru1989 Said: |
| great job depressing but great |
| On September 25th 2007 transgenic Said: |
| This is really good! And it's very easy to relate to! |
| On September 25th 2007 assumetheworst Said: |
| wow
thats awsome...although it was really deep and depressing
its great though
:) |
| On September 25th 2007 California1516 Said: |
| this is sad:( |
