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Air is pulled out of my lungs.Rate this Poem
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Betrayed
Air is pulled out of my lungs.
Your betrayal hits me hard.
Falling to the ground with tears in my eyes.
I ask you why? Expecting an answer.
Turning your head you refuse to answer.
A life fighting together and, I don’t even get a reason why.
Tears are rolling down my cheeks.
Knowing now that our love means nothing, meant nothing.
I turn away ashamed to have loved you.
As you raise your sword for the final blow.
You still mange to try and deceive me.
“I love you” the final words I hear.
The final thing I see is your single cold tear.
Then everything stops.
I fall into everlasting peace.
Waiting for the day you come to join me.
My betraying false lover.
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| On August 28th 2007 Pikkakard Said : | |
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Very good |
| On August 27th 2007 YoungPoet213 Said : | |
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Love it! It's great |
| On August 25th 2007 Tigga16 Said : | |
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Love it |
| On August 25th 2007 blutess Said : | |
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wow i like it. it catches u |
| On August 25th 2007 luvhim4ever12 Said : | |
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very good
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| On August 25th 2007 daisylady719 Said : | |
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ooooo I love it! Just went thru the same damn thing too. |
| On August 25th 2007 Shadowscar12 Said : | |
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Wow. Touching. |
| On August 25th 2007 alexia66 Said : | |
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nice, i love this one |
| On August 25th 2007 countygirl16 Said : | |
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this is an amazing poem! i LOVE it! :) |
| On August 25th 2007 massofwebs Said : | |
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