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Air is pulled out of my lungs.

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Betrayed

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Air is pulled out of my lungs.

Your betrayal hits me hard.

Falling to the ground with tears in my eyes.

I ask you why? Expecting an answer.

Turning your head you refuse to answer.

A life fighting together and, I don’t even get a reason why.

Tears are rolling down my cheeks.

Knowing now that our love means nothing, meant nothing.

I turn away ashamed to have loved you.

As you raise your sword for the final blow.

You still mange to try and deceive me.

“I love you” the final words I hear.

The final thing I see is your single cold tear.

Then everything stops.

I fall into everlasting peace.

Waiting for the day you come to join me.

My betraying false lover.

 

 

 

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On August 28th 2007 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard Very good
On August 27th 2007 YoungPoet213 Said :
YoungPoet213 Love it! It's great
On August 25th 2007 Tigga16 Said :
Tigga16 Love it
On August 25th 2007 blutess Said :
blutess wow i like it. it catches u
On August 25th 2007 luvhim4ever12 Said :
luvhim4ever12 very good
On August 25th 2007 daisylady719 Said :
daisylady719 ooooo I love it! Just went thru the same damn thing too.
On August 25th 2007 Shadowscar12 Said :
Shadowscar12 Wow. Touching.
On August 25th 2007 alexia66 Said :
alexia66 nice, i love this one
On August 25th 2007 countygirl16 Said :
countygirl16 this is an amazing poem! i LOVE it! :)
On August 25th 2007 massofwebs Said :
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