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Sultry Seraphim
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Created on 7-29-07
A sexy slim seraphim sauntered across Saturn’s swirly rings
The sway of her supple breasts swelling under satin
Caused swift satisfaction and salivating
Symphony of the swan song plays softy, seductively
Like her sweet sensual smile
Sapphires sparkle in the supernova
Scandalously dressed and sweaty
She dances sacrificing herself to savage serpents surrounding her
Suppressing my desire I strive to save her
Taking sabre and sword from scabbard slaughtering the snakes
She’s safe surrendering to me
Finally this sacred sultry creature stays in my sanctuary
She feels my sympathy she wants to survive
For the sake of our sanity and salvation we should sail to saffron space
Perhaps salvage and sanctify this sacrilegious act but no
We spend steamy nights skin to skin saturated to the soul
Please Login to post comments| On August 25th 2007 daisylady719 Said : | |
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Holy alliteration batman!! I liked it. :) |
| On August 25th 2007 ukgirl4eva Said : | |
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need i say wat i think hun i think u no as i love all ur work very well done babes |
| On August 22nd 2007 alexia66 Said : | |
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wow, this is different but good good works |
| On August 21st 2007 diet7up Said : | |
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I LIKE POEMS LIKE THIS GOOD JOB! |
| On August 21st 2007 akrovaz Said : | |
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It's different, in a way that makes it so unique. I like it, especially your use of alliteration. Very nice! |
| On August 21st 2007 cohnwrithe Said : | |
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Lovely piece of writing. Words are great things, and you use them elegantly. |
| On August 21st 2007 goodgurl8504 Said : | |
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Hmmm... Different... Tons of metaphors, kind of hard to keep track of... But over all pretty good... |
| On July 31st 2007 petersonsv Said : | |
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very different but different is good |
| On July 30th 2007 undiie Said : | |
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Its weird....but good. =] |
| On July 29th 2007 babycrzzy Said : | |
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nice |
| On July 29th 2007 lisajoann88 Said : | |
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beautiful! |
| On July 29th 2007 KillTheWhore Said : | |
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nice work |
