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Missing Someone
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Date Made: Apr 20 2007
Missing someone is a waste of time.
People are always commenting on missing someone.
If they miss them then they should look out the window.
They'd be surprised to see that their lover is still there.
So it seems pretty impossible to miss someone so near.
Yes it's love that makes them miss their lovers,
But they were just with you it's not possible to miss them... Right.
You're lying to yourself and to your love.
Missing someone is a waste of time.
Old:
Date Made: Dec 2006
I don’t get it so many people say they miss their partner right after they leave.
I don’t find that possible it never happened to me.
I know their in love I have been to but missing someone you can still see if you just look out the window is impossible... Right?
So why do people lie to the person they supposedly love?
Missing someone is a waste of time.
| On July 30th 2007 pinkstar5 Said : | |
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this is good :) |
| On July 30th 2007 AikoSaru Said : | |
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ya there right kinda like a story but still good |
| On July 30th 2007 chocohott Said : | |
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good, but it did kinda sound like a story, but i still liked it |
| On July 29th 2007 babycrzzy Said : | |
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um... well i always miss my friends, family and lovers( when he was still here) as soon as they left but that was when they were gone down the road and i couldn't see them anymore. but great poem |
| On July 28th 2007 goodgurl8504 Said : | |
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Pretty good... I just don't think posting both versions was necessary, because the new one said everything the old one did, just better... So reading it seemed unnecessarily repetitious. But I get what you're saying... |
| On July 28th 2007 inlovewithc17 Said : | |
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its good but i aggree with what "alexia66" said!!!! |
| On July 28th 2007 AmberDawnnX Said : | |
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its more of a prose i know i just i should have put that there |
| On July 28th 2007 pinkslip300 Said : | |
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its true, all of it
and i beleive it |
| On July 28th 2007 amiebabee Said : | |
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mmm its like a diary entry... |
| On July 28th 2007 alexia66 Said : | |
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hmm not bad, but to me it reads more liek a story or entry. but still nice feelisgs into it and we all feel like that |


