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Created: 07/27 2007
Views: 751
Category: Tragedy

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Thoughts During Suicide

The last tears fall from my eyes.

And with them my hope dies.

I knew this was going to happen.

I wanted it to right?

To late to change my mind now.

Blood flows out wrists.

Slowly now not fast like a few minutes ago.

Its going to end soon.

Its not at all what I thought.

There’s a feeling of emptiness and a cense of utter loneliness.

I didn’t want it to feel like this not my last moments of life.

But in the end it wont matter.

I’ll be happy in my death...right?

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On October 15th 2008 SummerxCyanide Said: 
SummerxCyanide deep
On December 23rd 2007 fallenXx420 Said: 
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whoa...deep...i like it...and can relate
On July 29th 2007 kkmill07 Said: 
kkmill07 good=] was this about you?
On July 29th 2007 ryroxy18 Said: 
ryroxy18 wow that was good!! write more
On July 29th 2007 puddingbetter Said: 
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erm...not really a poem...more of a story about how u r killing urself...
On July 28th 2007 tswieberg Said: 
tswieberg Oh wow, I hope this isn't the way you feel. Awesome poem.
On July 27th 2007 ericarenfro Said: 
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i hope you are okay. you're poems say you need help. it extremely artistic and i respect you for publishing them. but just dont give up on life...
On July 27th 2007 bethm300 Said: 
bethm300 or he lol
On July 27th 2007 bethm300 Said: 
bethm300 veary sad and dark as she angelalone said but i loved the poem...veary good! thumbs up!
On July 27th 2007 angelalone Said: 
angelalone very dark, but it's an excellent poem...thumbs up.
On July 27th 2007 diet7up Said: 
diet7up WOW YOUR THOUGHTS ARE DARK I HOPE YOU ARE HAPPY ENOUGH NOT TO DO THAT BECAUSE YOU POEMS ARE REALLY GOOD
On July 27th 2007 chrissey08h2 Said: 
chrissey08h2 deep.. its a really good poem
On July 27th 2007 transgenic Said: 
transgenic That's great! I don't really know what else to say!
On July 27th 2007 KillTheWhore Said: 
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im just happy you didnt die