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Created on 7-27-07
I stand here in the darkness not knowing how I got here.
My feet are wet, I think I’m standing in water but I look, and I’m standing in blood.
I panic the silence is broken a star shaped mirror appears.
I move towards the mirror, I’m shocked the person I see is the soul me.
The kind, loving, gentle me the one I put to a silent death by suppressing my feelings.
Her revenge is here she locks me behind the mirror with her forever cold, helpless, and trapped.
My death is quick and I am forgotten but I live forever behind the mirror with her as one.
Please Login to post comments| On July 19th 2008 soinlove83 Said : | |
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very good loved this one too |
| On July 29th 2007 aFigment Said : | |
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Wow, that got my imagination going. |
| On July 28th 2007 WHJHchick Said : | |
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Thats really good you can tell your not fake!! |
| On July 28th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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I love it. |
| On July 27th 2007 diet7up Said : | |
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I UNDERSTAND THIS POEM I THINK IS IT ABOUT HOW YOU PUT YOUR FEELINGS TO DEATH AND IT'S KIND OF KILLING YOU ANY WHO IT'S REALLY GOOD |
| On July 27th 2007 lisajoann88 Said : | |
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really really good! |
| On July 27th 2007 judy11111 Said : | |
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how come all ur poems r about death??? |
| On July 27th 2007 undiie Said : | |
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My favorite of this group of posted poems. =] |
| On July 27th 2007 KillTheWhore Said : | |
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i remeber when you made this in 8th grade |
