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What Hell Really Is

Views (400) Pain Created on 7-27-07 Flag

Looking up there it is,

It is in your eyes.

The cruelty of your being.

I fear your smile.

Knowing I am in danger from you.

Evil smiles are never good.

Taking your blades.

Laying them next to me.

I am frozen inside.

All too aware of what will happen next.

Slicing my skin.

Taking your time.

The curse of awareness,

Letting me know this is just the beginning.

I would be better off not knowing that.

The pain burns.

I am dying to catch my breath,

I am dying to die.

He is far from done with me.

Crying inside.

I understand now.

What hell really is.

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On July 28th 2007 ruler0penguins Said :
ruler0penguins I acctually didn't see it as all that sad. I saw it as fearful. As in it's pretty much a horror story where the narrator finds out they are going through hell. It's very well written and keeps you thinking. Keep it up!
On July 28th 2007 tswieberg Said :
tswieberg This is well written. Really sad but but really good.
On July 27th 2007 bethm300 Said :
bethm300 so deep and sad but veary well written, i love it!
On July 27th 2007 diet7up Said :
diet7up LOVE IS DEEP PAIN SOMETIMES
On July 27th 2007 lisajoann88 Said :
lisajoann88 very well written! good job!
On July 27th 2007 joabizz Said :
joabizz i knew the feeling, great job...
On July 27th 2007 Hellcro Said :
Hellcro Its a saddening beauty, I like it alot.
On July 27th 2007 KillTheWhore Said :
my picture
its so deep and dark