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What Hell Really Is
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Created on 7-27-07
Looking up there it is,
It is in your eyes.
The cruelty of your being.
I fear your smile.
Knowing I am in danger from you.
Evil smiles are never good.
Taking your blades.
Laying them next to me.
I am frozen inside.
All too aware of what will happen next.
Slicing my skin.
Taking your time.
The curse of awareness,
Letting me know this is just the beginning.
I would be better off not knowing that.
The pain burns.
I am dying to catch my breath,
I am dying to die.
He is far from done with me.
Crying inside.
I understand now.
What hell really is.
Please Login to post comments| On July 28th 2007 ruler0penguins Said : | |
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I acctually didn't see it as all that sad. I saw it as fearful. As in it's pretty much a horror story where the narrator finds out they are going through hell. It's very well written and keeps you thinking. Keep it up! |
| On July 28th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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This is well written. Really sad but but really good. |
| On July 27th 2007 bethm300 Said : | |
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so deep and sad but veary well written, i love it! |
| On July 27th 2007 diet7up Said : | |
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LOVE IS DEEP PAIN SOMETIMES |
| On July 27th 2007 lisajoann88 Said : | |
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very well written! good job! |
| On July 27th 2007 joabizz Said : | |
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i knew the feeling, great job... |
| On July 27th 2007 Hellcro Said : | |
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Its a saddening beauty, I like it alot. |
| On July 27th 2007 KillTheWhore Said : | |
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its so deep and dark |
