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Killing Me Killing You

Views (331) Pain Created on 7-26-07 Flag

Love me I love you.

Kill me before I kill you.

Do you love me I think not.

You beat me with the onslaught.

Burning the last words in my skin.

The last words I heard from my kin.

They where as fallows and said with hate.

"I hope you die and then get raped"

And with my last breath and bloody tear.

You have made it all too clear.

That you’re the last person that would ever care.

That I’m always living in this bloody nightmare.

And to you my love I bid farewell.

As I approach the gates of hell.

Love me I love you.

Kill me before I kill you.

We are one and of the same.

Now hell drives us insane.
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On November 29th 2007 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 Very Good
On October 6th 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 I love the ryhmeing, and just how you wrote it was beautiful and brilliant
On July 27th 2007 diet7up Said :
diet7up MURDER SUASIDE
On July 26th 2007 joabizz Said :
joabizz ugh, ouch... that was very dark, but great creativity!! and great writing!! :)
On July 26th 2007 Frano28 Said :
Frano28 wow this reminds me slightly of one of mine called if only u knew :) its very good u r very talented
On July 26th 2007 undiie Said :
undiie Favorite one. =]
On July 26th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said :
xxcassiejayxx love it!!!
On July 26th 2007 Slick50nepo Said :
Slick50nepo Crazy good! It should be thee lyrics to a heavy metal song! Sorry I didn't rate up all of your creativity but I got most of it:P and I got hecka slow dial-up:( but...You're talented;)
On July 26th 2007 KillTheWhore Said :
my picture
ditto
On July 26th 2007 Jeremy062902 Said :
Jeremy062902 I love the ryhme scheme at the beginning and end.