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My Life Is Over - My Suicide |
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My Life Is Over - My Suicide
I found a part of me that I didn’t know was there.
I wasted my life away thinking no one cared.
And now that my end draws to a close.
I see my parting will cause some people woes.
I really don’t want it to end but I need it to.
The last few years I’ve really felt blue.
Everyone thinks I’m immature and heartless but that’s not me.
I hide my suffering and depression with happiness and glee.
When I did find happiness and had my depression taken away.
It was ripped away by a stupid little fray.
Now that this has happened I feel even worst.
And to that little bitch I give you my curse.
And to the person that gave me happiness I give you my soul.
So this unhappy ending will never have to be told.
So goodbye to world goodbye to it all.
And don’t stop what you’re doing when my blood starts to fall.
| On March 21st 2009 tricia001131 Said: |
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| i love this one!!!
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| On March 1st 2009 engel7 Said: |
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| aaww...heart-breaking...beautifully done! |
| On October 15th 2008 SummerxCyanide Said: |
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| amazing |
| On September 6th 2008 christopher199 Said: |
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| amazing |
| On July 27th 2008 TiffanyHeiny Said: |
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| Wow...you are good. |
| On April 17th 2008 raywiley69 Said: |
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| amazing... |
| On March 17th 2008 susie3349 Said: |
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| you seem to be a very pasionate writer... love it |
| On November 29th 2007 gonzo4201 Said: |
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| Love it! It reminds me of how I feel ....alot of the time. |
| On October 18th 2007 krislynn08 Said: |
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| this is a really good poem. I know exactly how you feel. |
| On October 16th 2007 GrowUp1 Said: |
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| wow i like this. *xoxox* Lizzy |
| On August 2nd 2007 bethm300 Said: |
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| VERY NICE POEM!
I LIKE IT ALOTE. |
| On July 28th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said: |
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| Great poem! |
| On July 28th 2007 julzbabey Said: |
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| i know where your commin from, but you cant to that to all the people you love and the people that love you.
great poem tho.
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| On July 26th 2007 JUSTSOEZ Said: |
| On July 26th 2007 Frano28 Said: |
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| Very sad and emotional very good the best one of urs i rekon ♥ |
| On July 26th 2007 undiie Said: |
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| =] Great, yo. |
| On July 26th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said: |
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| great poem, love it, like jeremy062902, love the last two lines |
| On July 26th 2007 DragOnzHeart Said: |
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| its so nice..love it |
| On July 26th 2007 Slick50nepo Said: |
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| Wow! |
| On July 26th 2007 numba1chic Said: |
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| i love this especially the ending, really got me hooked |
| On July 26th 2007 jglvsjca Said: |
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| That's some real deep feelings, hope those thought are not sincere, talk to someone if they are! |
| On July 26th 2007 alexia66 Said: |
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| woah.. wot can i say. thats the deep turmoil of a misunderstood person.. and i know a few |
| On July 26th 2007 joabizz Said: |
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| very sad,,, but nice writing.. |
| On July 26th 2007 KillTheWhore Said: |
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| nice flow |
| On July 26th 2007 Jeremy062902 Said: |
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| Love the last 2 lines. Nice hook. |


