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Created: 07/26 2007
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Category: Pain

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My Life Is Over - My Suicide

I found a part of me that I didn’t know was there.
I wasted my life away thinking no one cared.
And now that my end draws to a close.
I see my parting will cause some people woes.
I really don’t want it to end but I need it to.
The last few years I’ve really felt blue.
Everyone thinks I’m immature and heartless but that’s not me.
I hide my suffering and depression with happiness and glee.
When I did find happiness and had my depression taken away.
It was ripped away by a stupid little fray.
Now that this has happened I feel even worst.
And to that little bitch I give you my curse.
And to the person that gave me happiness I give you my soul.
So this unhappy ending will never have to be told.
So goodbye to world goodbye to it all.
And don’t stop what you’re doing when my blood starts to fall.

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On March 21st 2009 tricia001131 Said: 
tricia001131 i love this one!!!
On March 1st 2009 engel7 Said: 
engel7 aaww...heart-breaking...beautifully done!
On October 15th 2008 SummerxCyanide Said: 
SummerxCyanide amazing
On September 6th 2008 christopher199 Said: 
christopher199 amazing
On July 27th 2008 TiffanyHeiny Said: 
TiffanyHeiny Wow...you are good.
On April 17th 2008 raywiley69 Said: 
raywiley69 amazing...
On March 17th 2008 susie3349 Said: 
susie3349 you seem to be a very pasionate writer... love it
On November 29th 2007 gonzo4201 Said: 
gonzo4201 Love it! It reminds me of how I feel ....alot of the time.
On October 18th 2007 krislynn08 Said: 
krislynn08 this is a really good poem. I know exactly how you feel.
On October 16th 2007 GrowUp1 Said: 
GrowUp1 wow i like this. *xoxox* Lizzy
On August 2nd 2007 bethm300 Said: 
bethm300 VERY NICE POEM! I LIKE IT ALOTE.
On July 28th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said: 
Tiffiscool16 Great poem!
On July 28th 2007 julzbabey Said: 
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i know where your commin from, but you cant to that to all the people you love and the people that love you. great poem tho.
On July 26th 2007 JUSTSOEZ Said: 
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Amber I hope you will seek God. I have been where you are at and found only he can fill the hole in your heart so that you will find ALL that you are and all that he lovingly created you to be....you'll find relationships and people will not have authority over your emotions..they will simply add to your life because you will not be looking for answers in them.....
On July 26th 2007 Frano28 Said: 
Frano28 Very sad and emotional very good the best one of urs i rekon ♥
On July 26th 2007 undiie Said: 
undiie =] Great, yo.
On July 26th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said: 
xxcassiejayxx great poem, love it, like jeremy062902, love the last two lines
On July 26th 2007 DragOnzHeart Said: 
DragOnzHeart its so nice..love it
On July 26th 2007 Slick50nepo Said: 
Slick50nepo Wow!
On July 26th 2007 numba1chic Said: 
numba1chic i love this especially the ending, really got me hooked
On July 26th 2007 jglvsjca Said: 
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That's some real deep feelings, hope those thought are not sincere, talk to someone if they are!
On July 26th 2007 alexia66 Said: 
alexia66 woah.. wot can i say. thats the deep turmoil of a misunderstood person.. and i know a few
On July 26th 2007 joabizz Said: 
joabizz very sad,,, but nice writing..
On July 26th 2007 KillTheWhore Said: 
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nice flow
On July 26th 2007 Jeremy062902 Said: 
Jeremy062902 Love the last 2 lines. Nice hook.