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Created:
03/23 2008
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53
Category:
Pain
My Poems
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Wondering |
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6
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Standing, Crying, Dying |
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6
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None |
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3
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The Last Breath |
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3
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Don't Tell Me |
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4
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Mixed Emotions |
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3
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Wondering |
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4
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Is It Possible... |
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Hidden By Tears |
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Masks |
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Baby Girl |
Hidden By Tears
Darkness,
pain
an echo
you speak, "hello"
there is no answer
no one there
have you been forgotten?
left all alone?
You desperately search for a light
another echo
your voice asks, "hello,
anyone there?"
no answer
realization seeps in
and darkness closes aroun
the pain begins to seer
You've been left alone
to fight the battle hidden by the tears
Please Login to post comments| On March 24th 2008 Bexi93 Said: |
| this is a great way to describe the hurt some one could be feeling when left alone and when no one is there to help you. i really like it, so keep me posted for when you write more. |
