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Created: 01/10 2008
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Category: Fear

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To Feel Alive

Hollow deception looking into my own eyes

Echoing lies whisper from my thoughts

Submissive I become to my own self

Mocking smirk creeps upon her face

Eroding the very person i'm made to be

I cannot see myself past this veil of deceit

and how these lies pretty as lace speak to me

ell and flow it comforts me now

 Just as a double sided mirror has two sides

i'm striving to look past my reflection

break free from lies of perfection

let me see from your point of veiw

allow me to look upon myself in loving kindness

Help me break my own self

and these pieces back together 

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On January 30th 2008 listen147 Said: 
listen147 wow. you must be a real poet! =] i too wish to break free from the image of perfection, but its hard! lol. nice poem though! =]