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Cheaters |
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Cheaters
The faithful woman brings home meat and flowers for her man.
The cheating woman brings home herpes and warts for the clan.
A faithful woman cooks and cleans and sucks her man's cock.
A cheating woman sits on her ass and bitches about dirty socks.
The faithful woman smiles and plays
The cheating woman eats sweets while her tooth decays
A faithful woman is warm and shaved all over.
A cheating woman is horny and hairy and pulls over to fuck on the shoulder.(of the road)
A faithful woman bakes cookies and gives me kisses.
A cheating woman doesn't care where in the bathroom she pisses.
The faithful woman gets our names etched in oak.
The cheating woman comes home late from snorting coke.
I booted the faithful woman out the door.
I took the cheating bitch and got a penis sore.
I gently hugged the faithful woman good bye
I caught the cheater in one to many a lie
I beat her ass and threw her across the room.
I grabbed her by the hair and broke her legs with the broom.
She spit in my face and called me a creep
I threw her stupid ass down the stairs, boy they were steep.
I chained her to bed and smacked her around
All over the floor is where her teeth were found.
She learned the hard way that being faithful is best.
Without that knowledge she would have been like all the rest
Lifeless laying under my bed.
Bloodied face, missing limbs, and Dead.
| On September 8th 2008 midnightxxx Said : | |
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sweet. |
| On August 8th 2008 justlikeme1569 Said : | |
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I actually liked it and then I got to the ending man your curropt but cool I guess. |
| On May 28th 2008 moosegurl01 Said : | |
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kind of messed up ending...but a good poem overall |
| On November 13th 2007 LQQKatME6 Said : | |
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Wow! Intense...I love it! |
| On September 6th 2007 lisaljb Said : | |
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okay that gave me a really interesting image, great rythm, and insanely but amazing in a poetic way. |
| On July 12th 2007 desolateflower Said : | |
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i agree with pang =] |
| On July 2nd 2007 mayzie71 Said : | |
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I think this is my favorite poem yet on here. I thinking cheating is for the craven and It definatly made me smile to read this. It also has good poetic flow. |
| On July 2nd 2007 molly09dnny Said : | |
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this is fucking messed up...i dont care how much of a nasty skank a women is nobody deserves that shit....that made me want to vomit! |
| On June 18th 2007 PoeticPang Said : | |
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omg,,, that is the most awful fantastic poem ever!!!! EVER!... XD... u are so fucked up,,,,,, geesh,,,,,,,,,, do u know what i do to cheating men?............ u should know,, seeing as u know what to do to those cheating whores,,,,,, lol,,,, good job on the rhyming btw,,, very intriguing,,, pretty personal tho,,, hmmmmmm....... nice insane touch,,,, ^_______^~~~~~~~~~~~~~Pang |
| On June 14th 2007 undiie Said : | |
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+1 |
| On June 14th 2007 babycrzzy Said : | |
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this is bullshit to me but that just my opinion. |
| On May 27th 2007 NeutralR1 Said : | |
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A tear rolls down my face. why did they take away the down rate button *crying* |
| On May 17th 2007 peterserpent Said : | |
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i've had a similar experience.... +1 |
| On May 14th 2007 AcidManWitFire Said : | |
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Yeah, it is. I wouldn't kill anyone. |
| On May 14th 2007 cromwell623 Said : | |
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Holy shit. I like this. Show tem who the fuck is dominant!!!!!!!!!! I just hope this is in a hpothetical tense...... :% |


