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For Miss Kinneas... Good Luck.

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Always out there...

Views (132) Other Created on 6-4-07 Flag

He's always out there,
   He's always hurt...
Always somewhere,
   Constantly at work...
He won't listen to the wisdom offered through worry...
   How he can push himself so far; I wish I could see...
When will he fall? Will anyone be there?
   Will I find him in time? Can I prove that I care?
Though he looks away everytime that I try,
   I know there's something still getting through.
All that 'I don't understand those feelings', that's all a lie,
   I just won't accept that that's true!
Please hold on Mark, and please don't be mad...
I'm leaving to find you, this town just leaves me so sad...
Without you here, without your smile...
I can barely hold on, hold on for a while...
I'm going to prove that I do more than just care...
I know that I'll find you...
You're always out there...

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On August 14th 2007 fgggfx Said :
fgggfx luv it!
On July 8th 2007 angelalone Said :
angelalone another wonderful work.thumbs up.
On June 26th 2007 InTheMist Said :
InTheMist very nice....
On June 16th 2007 cclearwater Said :
cclearwater this is good, it takes some contemplation... great job.
On June 14th 2007 username685 Said :
username685 thats deep very deep
On June 6th 2007 Pooh455 Said :
Pooh455 awwee. i love it.
On June 4th 2007 jirrith2007 Said :
jirrith2007 I like this. Well written. It shows a deep sense of caring for someone and trying to find them. Keep it up!