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Created: 05/04 2007
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Category: Pain

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Tears of a Broken Soul

what do we see in this life

death and destruction all around

but none compares

to the hole in my heart

to the pain you gave and

my life you stole.

i have nothing left

i have crashed and burned

are you happy now

i bleed from the soul

leaving a trail of disbelief.

the end of my existance 

the destruction of my soul

it will cry forever with the tears

of my broken soul.. 

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On January 26th 2008 gonzo4201 Said: 
gonzo4201 I know this feeling well
On November 21st 2007 jake189 Said: 
jake189 i like it dude... it's so amazing... and the message of your poem is so dramatic that you can really feel the pain inside.
On June 20th 2007 massofwebs Said: 
massofwebs wow tht is deep and touching and an awesome poem
On June 3rd 2007 timmyboy1986 Said: 
timmyboy1986 also very touching i like this one alot
On June 1st 2007 marlana79 Said: 
marlana79 I completely understand this. Wonderful:)
On May 26th 2007 dark013angel Said: 
dark013angel pain is beauty in its own....great piece