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Created:
04/29 2007
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269
Category:
Fear
My Poems
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Lost in Thought |
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Meaning |
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I Will |
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In all Essence |
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VISION |
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WHY |
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Inside |
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Tears of a Broken Soul |
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Never Again |
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And now for something completley differe |
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its a Rhyme |
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Phase 1 |
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bullet for a thought |
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The Lords PUB Prayer |
VISION
Do you see what i do
It lays all around me
Tearing away at my soul
Delving into my mind
Destroying piece by piece
Dont you see it
Its presence overwhelms
Why cant you see
The darkness has come over
The shroud is not clear
My path is crowded and unclear
Where do i go, i cant see
With out it what do i do
WHY CANT YOU SEE ME
Please Login to post comments| On July 15th 2007 ausjo Said: |
| I love it. It's dark, yet insightful. |
| On June 10th 2007 individulsong Said: |
| this is good. you do a good job of shaking your reader by the shoulders and relaying the urgency of the poem... it's good. i like it. |
| On June 2nd 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said: |
| Very thought provoking! Love it! |
| On May 26th 2007 dark013angel Said: |
| nice...very nice...you have a lot of talent..use it well |
| On May 4th 2007 wannabetimthe1 Said: |
| I love this one too.=) you're good |
| On May 4th 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said: |
| Sometimes we are our own biggest dangers. Again...I love this. I'm liking your work. :) |
| On May 1st 2007 AlterEgo007 Said: |
| I cant see you cause you arent there |
