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Created on 3-18-08
sometimes i wish
that i had wings
so i could fly
far away from here
away from your words
and your irrational rules
away from the bruises
and broken, glass tears
i feel so tired and low
withdrawn from my social experiences
it hurts to much to talk
its easier just to keep quiet about things
about my endless torrment
why wont you just let me be
i can make my own decisions
i know what i want
im almost 22 years old
i dont need your shit anymore
you pathetic excuse for flesh
i hate you
Father!
I Hate You
maybe if i just make the next cut
deep enough
i wont have to worry
anymore...
that i had wings
so i could fly
far away from here
away from your words
and your irrational rules
away from the bruises
and broken, glass tears
i feel so tired and low
withdrawn from my social experiences
it hurts to much to talk
its easier just to keep quiet about things
about my endless torrment
why wont you just let me be
i can make my own decisions
i know what i want
im almost 22 years old
i dont need your shit anymore
you pathetic excuse for flesh
i hate you
Father!
I Hate You
maybe if i just make the next cut
deep enough
i wont have to worry
anymore...
Please Login to post comments| On April 17th 2008 nlis2kool Said : | |
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Sad but nice job on the writing of it |
| On March 26th 2008 shadyishott Said : | |
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wow this is gooooooooooooooood i luv it but its sad how can a dad ever do this to there lil' gurl its sad but a very good poem |
| On March 21st 2008 surefirefailur Said : | |
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It's very nicely written, but.... why not try rapidly spinning in a circle? It makes you too dizzy to think. |
| On March 20th 2008 xmradio2007 Said : | |
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love it even though it is sad but so easy to relate to |
| On March 20th 2008 chayeah22 Said : | |
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I can relate to this. |
| On March 19th 2008 jeff2625 Said : | |
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very sad..no one is worth ur life..live it for u..learn to forgive those who hurt you..hateing is not the answer..good poem though..it shows all of ur emotions...keep writing..and try to be positive and love u.. |
| On March 19th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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This is soo sad! It's very well written. Still sad. :( |
