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Created on 3-12-08
Thou, I long to kiss you sweetly,
and press my lips to yours
you deny me all I'm worthy
and your closing all your doors.
I can't help but think I'm sorry
and that I have done you wrong
but I need to know you love me,
that you've loved me all along.
Can't you see that I still need you
that I long to feel your touch
I am dying here without you
cause I'm loving you that much!
Please won't you forgive me?
I'm needing you that bad
I'm sick and tired of crying
but I lost you, now I'm sad.
I should say I'm sorry
that I love you and I need you
but will that change the way you feel,
will that change the things you do?
I still long for loving,
all the great things that you are
knowing you'll forever be,
my forever, shining star!
and press my lips to yours
you deny me all I'm worthy
and your closing all your doors.
I can't help but think I'm sorry
and that I have done you wrong
but I need to know you love me,
that you've loved me all along.
Can't you see that I still need you
that I long to feel your touch
I am dying here without you
cause I'm loving you that much!
Please won't you forgive me?
I'm needing you that bad
I'm sick and tired of crying
but I lost you, now I'm sad.
I should say I'm sorry
that I love you and I need you
but will that change the way you feel,
will that change the things you do?
I still long for loving,
all the great things that you are
knowing you'll forever be,
my forever, shining star!
Please Login to post comments| On June 4th 2008 smile4evr Said : | |
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this is like my other one...in different ways...u still want the guy in this one...but in mne i wanted to tell him how much i don't need him! this flows and i love it...great job!!!!!!!!! |
| On March 12th 2008 surefirefailur Said : | |
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Awww... that's too bad. |
| On March 12th 2008 jeff2625 Said : | |
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very good poem...beautiful..love it.. |
