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~beaten! |
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~Trusted uncle~ |
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~I REMEMBER~ |
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~I WAS THAT GURL~ |
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~CHAOTIC MIND~ |
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bloodletting! |
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~SCARS UPON SCARS~ |
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~WHY I BLEED~ |
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~My Fault~ |
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~Remember Love~ |
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~My own little memory book~
These scars I wear
Are courage medal's
Of battles long past
Each scar has a story
And how I wish I
Could say the
Pain is only
Skin deep.
These medals
Are scars of a
Lifetime. My
Own little
Memory book
Right on my skin.
To tell you, I'd
Have to surrender
And I'm not
Quite ready for
That and
Until that day
Comes, I'll
Continue adding
To my collection
Of memories.
These memories
Like a children's
Fairy tale gone
Incredibly gruesome
Are all part of
My emotional
Makeup.
Without them
Who would I be?
But with them
I have scars
I am strong
For these memories-
Are scars of a lifetime.
| On February 10th 2008 HumanF17TH Said : | |
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woah...i love the metaphors you used in this poem |
| On February 9th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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I was never a cutter but I was very much an addict. Alcohol was my drug of choice for years. I realted to the things you said in this poem in a big way! Especially the line "Without them, who would I be?" Gosh I remember feeling like that when I quit drinking. It was like my identity was gone. Really strange at first. BUT It got better, and better and better as I learned to fill my life with things that blow the doors off of alcohol and addictions!!!! :) Yeehaw!!!! |
| On February 6th 2008 AnaAlicia07 Said : | |
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this one is good also you are very good. ♥ |


