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yeah more heartfelts...

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Candle with no flame

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when you shut me out

i am the sky with no moon- no stars

 

i am a candle with no flame

i am fire with no warmth, no light

when u shut me out i am spring with no flowers,

no singing birds

 

i am rain without the rainbow

when u let me in- the breeze in the air tickles my skin

the birds song is sweet

stars are twinkling

my heart is warm.

 

if you are done with me

release me with words.

it is more mercy than silence

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On January 30th 2008 AnaAlicia07 Said :
AnaAlicia07 this is a really god poem i like it good job.... ♥
On January 29th 2008 HumanF17TH Said :
HumanF17TH aww...this is really good