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POEM ABOUT THE UPS &DOWNS OF H.S

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HIGH- SCHOOL

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HIGH-SCHOOL IS ONE LONG,ADVENTUROUS RIDE

COMPLAINING IN THE MORNING

HOMEWORK AT NIGHT

TRYING REAL HARD TO GET STRAIGHT A's

WANT TO GET THAT 4.0 G.P.A

SATISFIED WHEN YOU GET A B

BUT FRETTING WHEN YOU GET ONE C

 

GIRLS GETTING READY FOR THE PROM

DRESSING UP FOR THEIR DATES

WONDERING IF THE GUY IS THEIR SOULMATE

THERE ARE THE GIRLS THAT GET DEJECTED

NEVER GET ASKED OUT, SO THEY FEEL REJECTED

YOU CAN ONLY HOPE THEY'LL BE ONE GUY

WHO WILL MAKE YOUR PROM AN UNFORGETTABLE NIGHT

 

DON'T FORGET ABOUT ALL THE DRAMA

ABSENT FATHERS, AND BABY MAMAS

TEENAGERS GETTING DRUNK AND PARTYING ALL NIGHT

FEMALES DEBATING OVER WHO'S WRONG AND RIGHT

SILLY ARGUMEBNTS AND DUMB CAT-FIGHTS

 

BUT DESPITE ALL OF THESE THINGS

THE PEER PRESSURE AND ALL THE STRESS

GETTING LABELED AS A GEEK OR SOMEONE COOL

 YOU GOT TO BE CRAZY NOT TO LOVE HIGH- SCHOOL!

 

*OKAY HEY IT'S PATTY! SO YEAH HERE'S ANOTHER POEM. DO YOU LIKE? COMMENTS WOULD BE GREATLY APPRECIATED. YOU COULD LEAVE SUGGESTIONS ON HOW I CAN WRITE BETTER. BUT YEAH TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!ILY

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On February 23rd 2008 fallenXx420 Said :
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i like it a lot. u should just write more. ur a good writer but if ur not satisfied with ur work keep writing and make it better! u r ur worst critic!
On February 23rd 2008 ridinbitch0807 Said :
ridinbitch0807 Nice poem. Very lively, it's a kind of fun poem. I like it!
On February 23rd 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 Cute..so far my highschool life hasnt been like that (: but it has been hard (: