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HIGH- SCHOOL |
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HIGH- SCHOOL
HIGH-SCHOOL IS ONE LONG,ADVENTUROUS RIDE
COMPLAINING IN THE MORNING
HOMEWORK AT NIGHT
TRYING REAL HARD TO GET STRAIGHT A's
WANT TO GET THAT 4.0 G.P.A
SATISFIED WHEN YOU GET A B
BUT FRETTING WHEN YOU GET ONE C
GIRLS GETTING READY FOR THE PROM
DRESSING UP FOR THEIR DATES
WONDERING IF THE GUY IS THEIR SOULMATE
THERE ARE THE GIRLS THAT GET DEJECTED
NEVER GET ASKED OUT, SO THEY FEEL REJECTED
YOU CAN ONLY HOPE THEY'LL BE ONE GUY
WHO WILL MAKE YOUR PROM AN UNFORGETTABLE NIGHT
DON'T FORGET ABOUT ALL THE DRAMA
ABSENT FATHERS, AND BABY MAMAS
TEENAGERS GETTING DRUNK AND PARTYING ALL NIGHT
FEMALES DEBATING OVER WHO'S WRONG AND RIGHT
SILLY ARGUMEBNTS AND DUMB CAT-FIGHTS
BUT DESPITE ALL OF THESE THINGS
THE PEER PRESSURE AND ALL THE STRESS
GETTING LABELED AS A GEEK OR SOMEONE COOL
YOU GOT TO BE CRAZY NOT TO LOVE HIGH- SCHOOL!
*OKAY HEY IT'S PATTY! SO YEAH HERE'S ANOTHER POEM. DO YOU LIKE? COMMENTS WOULD BE GREATLY APPRECIATED. YOU COULD LEAVE SUGGESTIONS ON HOW I CAN WRITE BETTER. BUT YEAH TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!ILY
| On February 23rd 2008 fallenXx420 Said : | |
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i like it a lot. u should just write more. ur a good writer but if ur not satisfied with ur work keep writing and make it better! u r ur worst critic! |
| On February 23rd 2008 ridinbitch0807 Said : | |
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Nice poem. Very lively, it's a kind of fun poem. I like it! |
| On February 23rd 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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Cute..so far my highschool life hasnt been like that (: but it has been hard (: |


