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Created: 08/19 2009
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Category: Pain

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Man Down

Worthless

That’s what I am

As I sit there

Knitting a sweater of tears

To drown out the cold harshness of your words

I find that it’s useless

The sweater makes it worse

I am unable to recover myself

A sensitive soul

Shot down again and again

May have fallen for the last time

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On November 12th 2009 90999 Said: 
90999 you can't....that's just it....it's useless
On November 12th 2009 damonzane Said: 
damonzane Quick question. How do you knit a sweater or tears? Just asking. JK..
On August 25th 2009 90999 Said: 
90999 ...i don't understand...
On August 25th 2009 MizzCoco1841 Said: 
MizzCoco1841 damn
On August 21st 2009 90999 Said: 
90999 i know it cuold have been a little longer...but the feeling left and no more words could come out lolz....and thanks btw
On August 20th 2009 babeinlove1114 Said: 
babeinlove1114 i think its good.. could have went on a lil longer but it sounds good.. love the sweater of tears.. great way to put it..
On August 19th 2009 90999 Said: 
90999 it's kinda crappy, but i hadn't submitte d anything in a while, so i thought why not this :)