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7unicornrings

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another lovely poem for my lovely bf

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Our Love

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Created on 7-23-07

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This is too much for me

too much to handle

hear my plea

my life's not a scandal

What have I done

what did I do wrong

I feel like I'm the only one

maybe I just don't belong

I wanna feel a change

don't mind if it hurts

take away the pain

you're the only thing that works

Please hold me tightly

and don't let go

lift me up lightly

and I'll let you know

How much I love you

how much you mean

what I speak is true

our love is serene

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On November 20th 2007 dsouthernlily Said :

	I am so jealous of your natural talend. VERY GOOD!!!

On July 27th 2007 rockprincess31 Said :

	AWWWWWWWWW!!!!! That was really sweet!!! Awesome job, I love it!!!

On July 23rd 2007 Byrnesrebel Said :

	cool, nice job.

On July 23rd 2007 angeleyes62580 Said :

	Good Job !!

On July 23rd 2007 seritaj Said :

	cool......jus let n da significant oyha know.....huh?

On July 23rd 2007 heavenlyrose21 Said :

	very sweet poem!

On July 23rd 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said :

	it's a great poem, i lke it

On July 23rd 2007 tswieberg Said :

	This is a really good poem. I love it.

On July 23rd 2007 J3w3llC82890 Said :

	thats amazing!! please keep me posted for anymore poems!! Jewell

On July 23rd 2007 realpaintheory Said :

	very good :)

On July 23rd 2007 jimbob1432 Said :

	kudos.

On July 23rd 2007 lisajoann88 Said :

	i like it! very cool!

On July 23rd 2007 KiiAH69 Said :

	thats so cute...

On July 23rd 2007 dyingfminside Said :

	i love it! Good job!! :)

On July 23rd 2007 7unicornrings Said :