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I love you!! (this is for my brother)Rate this Poem
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R.I.P. Patrick Johnson
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Created on 7-16-07
My body trembles in fear
I'm afraid to lose everything
Why aren't you here
My heart aches in dispair
For you I cry this single tear
I cannot breathe this polluted air
This world has tormented you
But know that people really did care
I'm sorry I wasn't there for you
That's just something I cannot bare
I really cared and I still do
I hope this poem gets to you
Please forgive me
I know I wasn't here
For you I cry these non-stop tears
I still love you and always will
I hope my wounds are soon to heal
I hope this poem reaches you
So that you can know
How much I really do love you!
Please Login to post comments| On January 7th 2008 stormchoirs Said : | |
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*hugs tight* I miss him too.... I hate that things weren't that good between the two of us towards the end, we had been through a lot of shit together... *hugs again* it is a good poem though.... though I didn't cry at all *shifty eyes* |
| On July 18th 2007 realpaintheory Said : | |
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I must admit I had a little tear in my eye reading this. So full of emotion. Absolutely brilliant xxx |
| On July 18th 2007 Byrnesrebel Said : | |
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aw, this is so sad. good job on the peom. :\ |
| On July 16th 2007 Javellef Said : | |
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Touching! It is sad to lose someone as dear as a brother. Your poem is great way to honor his memory. |
| On July 16th 2007 twilight023 Said : | |
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wow this was really sad |
| On July 16th 2007 AlexINTJ Said : | |
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wow, I'm so sorry. This poem was wonderful though--and incredibly sad. : ( nice job |
