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another poem about my brother...Rate this Poem
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Showers of Tears
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Created on 10-11-07
I hope this poem gets to you
So you can see
What all you’ve done
And not just to me
But your family and friends too
Did you think this would solve your problems
Maybe
But it only adds to ours
Were you even thinking
About those who might care
When you took the gun
Were you even thinking
When you put it to your head
What were your last thoughts
As you pulled the trigger
I hope my showers of tears
Tell you I still care
But did you even care about me
When you pulled the trigger
Please Login to post comments| On November 20th 2007 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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:( awww sorry |
| On October 13th 2007 numbbbb0z Said : | |
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I'm so sorry for your loss =[[ - Maybe he'll understand what he's done if you..Described what he's done to you and your family? Showers of Tears..I know you have the personal feeling inside of you, and you need to reach it. Again, I'm sorry for your loss :( |
| On October 11th 2007 J3w3llC82890 Said : | |
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wow. thats deep...
im sorry.
~*Jewell*~ |
