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The new pledge of Allegience |
daddy please
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Created on 6-10-08
daddy, y do u make me cry,
make me plead to die.
Why do u kill me slowly, showing me how ur heart thinks of me coldly.
Why do u cause me pain, in places where it shouldnt rain.
Stop daddy please, i'll do anything.
Let me prove my strength, before this torture will become to far of a length.
Daddy i cry, do not tempt me to suicide.
daddy i cry, please stop thinking of me as ur slave, why do u enter my cave?
So much hate, so much pain.
My heart is full of shame.
so daddy please, do not make me aim, do not make me pull this trigur that desides life n death, cause thats why mommy has life in bars.
Please Login to post comments| On July 6th 2008 6615sweet Said : | |
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hey i wrote this poem...n no he does not rape me...even thow this is what the poem is talking about...i just wrote it cause i have many friends who fathers do rape them....n one has even gone mad....so i guess i wrote this poem for them.... |
| On June 11th 2008 lolhaileyloves Said : | |
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i deffinetly unserstand. thatz sad. |
| On June 10th 2008 AirplaneMan Said : | |
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great poem. hs lots of meaning and is even deeper than it appears on screen...right? |
| On June 10th 2008 tiffany1058 Said : | |
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WOW!!!!!!! great poem |
| On June 10th 2008 lexiigurl345 Said : | |
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o mi god does he rape you??are you okay?im soo sorry |
| On June 10th 2008 lexiigurl345 Said : | |
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o mi god does he rape you??are you okay?im soo sorry |
| On June 10th 2008 riley365 Said : | |
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OMG |
