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i originally wrote this on a napkin. :DRate this Poem
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butterfly wings
as i watch the wind blow the leavesit reminds me of a thousand butterfly wingsand i remember those times you smile at meoh my love for you is such a mysteryi wish i could feel your touchsee your smile and hear your voiceit would be easier if i didnt love you so muchbut when i think of you i have no choicei think of you every morning, every day, every nightof all the hppy memories we have madei have tried with all of my mightbut my love for you will not fadeeven the gray clouds make me smilebecause i imagine you dancing in the rainbetween us are many milesthat cause me so much heartache and painsometimes i wonder why i fell in loveeven though i so often told myself nobut my resistance my heart rose aboveand now i just have this sadness to showi do know that i'll never forget youmy first love you'll always beand im not writing this poem to swoonbecause you'll never guess "this poem is for me"now im trying my hardest to move onbut im afraid to force this you seebecause meaningless relationshipswill never match my fantasiesmaybe i fell in love with youbecause i was so far down in the deepthat i needed something to love, something to hold on tojust to save myself from meso as the wind comes to a standstilland the leaves rest peacefullyi realize this love is not "run of the mill"its the greatest thing in historyPS-background image is not mine. its from www.rampantscotland.com
| On August 4th 2008 UnSane420 Said : | |
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this almost made me cry it was so heart touching i love it so much! |
| On July 15th 2008 jwoody1980 Said : | |
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very up lifting and beautiful nice job
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| On July 10th 2008 hpfan731 Said : | |
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i cried a little reading this poem! BEAUTIFUL. I can't say enough!!! |
| On July 4th 2008 barbarian1 Said : | |
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verry good, much better than mine |
| On July 4th 2008 kittygirl48 Said : | |
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i love it! I thought it was just so romantic. I loved everything about it. |
| On July 4th 2008 deadpoet Said : | |
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"because i imagine you dancing in the rain" that was adorable |
| On July 4th 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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Its lovely and sweet....loved everything about it...And don't worry about the background,i do search google for the background on my poem. |


