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dear friend & MRSA victim. RIPRate this Poem
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GOODBYE |
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ALMOST |
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Is This How Death Is Cured? |
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Sally Smith |
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Never |
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butterfly wings |
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fades to gray |
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Borderline |
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Quiet Death |
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Dark reality |
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Living in a Paradox |
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sunset |
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Path of Life |
Sally Smith
Your eyes made me know
that everything would be fine
your hugs melted my heart
and strengthened my stride
Oh how I loved you
So many times I rose
just to see you once more
we never spoke of complex things
but your advice I couldn't ignore
Oh how I loved you
Yout taught me so much
through your actions and kindness
made me see the world new
through the heaps of mangled mess
Oh how I loved you
The people you helped
will never forget you
remembrance in jail cells
of hte battered hopes you maqde new
Oh how I loved you
You held on so long
I like to think for me
but probably because it was hard
for death to take someone like you away
Oh how I loved you
Even now when I'm alone
I think I feel you and hear
you holding me whispering your love
make me forget my fear
Oh how I love you
| On August 27th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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aww kind of sad, but it's great. Nice job! |
| On August 4th 2008 UnSane420 Said : | |
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i like this one its awesome! |
| On July 4th 2008 barbarian1 Said : | |
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i like it |
| On May 16th 2008 deadpoet Said : | |
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this was beautiful, just, amazing |
| On May 15th 2008 xoSuMmErRLuVoX Said : | |
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wow this is sooo touching.... my grandpa is suffering from MRSA =( |
| On May 15th 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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Sorry about ur lost though! may she rest in peace. |
| On May 15th 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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i don't really read the authors comment.hehehe |
| On May 15th 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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lol,hubby is pretty much alive.Scary thought sorry........love u baby..... |
| On May 15th 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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oh,i feel the same way for my husband.I love him soooooo
Good job. |


