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Created: 07/10 2007
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Category: Love

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just because

Do i hold a reservation

for the company of your insignificant existence?

can my love be your revelation?

can we decipher this, this instant?

 

You make me cry because i am ecstatic

smile because i am sorrowful

our spectrum screams erratic

and for all beasts would be wonderful

 

Our love is never envied

but our love- a thing maintained

I've worked our days like i have worked centuries

and love 'oh has love' remained

 

I wait impatient for your insecurities

to resolve them with my loyalties

to solve them-- truth and impurities

to keep you in my dismay

 

I love you with no other reason

than that you are mine

forever-- this time

you own me

i own you

and IT we define

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On July 12th 2007 500nets Said: 
500nets thats just how i talk
On July 12th 2007 inlovewithc17 Said: 
inlovewithc17 wow thats so sweet and i noticed you used a lot of big words and just wanted to say u dont have to do that if your trying to look or smart or something but its really good i love it!!!
On July 12th 2007 babycrzzy Said: 
babycrzzy excellent, powerful and really gives a great message now maybe ill be prepared for marriage
On July 10th 2007 thelostelement Said: 
my picture
excellent
On July 10th 2007 browneyes33 Said: 
browneyes33 this is awesome..I understand it completely.. :)
On July 10th 2007 individulsong Said: 
individulsong This is good. I really like it. You have a great tone; full of passion and emotion.
On July 10th 2007 ralicia Said: 
ralicia Interesting
On July 10th 2007 joabizz Said: 
joabizz This is pretty powerful, marrige is constant work, very nice job...