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just because
Do i hold a reservation
for the company of your insignificant existence?
can my love be your revelation?
can we decipher this, this instant?
You make me cry because i am ecstatic
smile because i am sorrowful
our spectrum screams erratic
and for all beasts would be wonderful
Our love is never envied
but our love- a thing maintained
I've worked our days like i have worked centuries
and love 'oh has love' remained
I wait impatient for your insecurities
to resolve them with my loyalties
to solve them-- truth and impurities
to keep you in my dismay
I love you with no other reason
than that you are mine
forever-- this time
you own me
i own you
and IT we define
| On July 12th 2007 500nets Said : | |
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thats just how i talk |
| On July 12th 2007 inlovewithc17 Said : | |
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wow thats so sweet and i noticed you used a lot of big words and just wanted to say u dont have to do that if your trying to look or smart or something but its really good i love it!!! |
| On July 12th 2007 babycrzzy Said : | |
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excellent, powerful and really gives a great message now maybe ill be prepared for marriage |
| On July 10th 2007 thelostelement Said : | |
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excellent |
| On July 10th 2007 browneyes33 Said : | |
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this is awesome..I understand it completely.. :) |
| On July 10th 2007 individulsong Said : | |
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This is good. I really like it. You have a great tone; full of passion and emotion. |
| On July 10th 2007 ralicia Said : | |
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Interesting |
| On July 10th 2007 joabizz Said : | |
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This is pretty powerful, marrige is constant work, very nice job... |


