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The flight of the shredded butterfly
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Created on 6-12-07
A light touch on the wings of this delicate breed, and it will no longer fly, thrive or feed.
Some humans, not insects, can be this way, Once off a path, then endlessly astray.
Today out of nowhere from the corner of my eye, I saw shredded and stripped brown wings struggling to fly.
With the wisp of a quite remarkable nerve, this creature beat odds, on God's reserve.
This was a butterfly with something to prove, in a case where other creatures refuse to move.
We could take a lesson , You and I, from the flight of the shredded butterfly
progress is never easy.
Please Login to post comments| On January 30th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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Such insight delightfully portrayed. I quite enjoyed it. |
| On January 7th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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Very True, I Loved It!! |
| On December 24th 2007 claude54130 Said : | |
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Loved it! |
| On October 14th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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Very nice Amanda. |
| On September 13th 2007 wannahug13 Said : | |
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i like it!! alot!! |
| On August 5th 2007 akrovaz Said : | |
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This poem is wonderful!! |
| On August 1st 2007 diet7up Said : | |
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WOW! THAT WAS OFF THE TOP OF YOUR HEAD AND ON YOUR LUNCH BREAK SEE IT TAKES ME A LONG TIME TO THINK OF ANY THING THIS IS REALLY COOL |
| On July 12th 2007 babycrzzy Said : | |
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nice |
| On June 18th 2007 xxbuggie Said : | |
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This is cute = ] Very nice! |
