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this is my brothers poem,Rate this Poem
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concrete |
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with the death of the leaves |
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gwen |
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untitled |
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its good for me |
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ode to my husband |
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procrastination |
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The Easy Way Out |
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identity |
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Scars |
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The flight of the shredded butterfly |
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just because |
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Her Hymn |
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plastics make it possible |
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pressing business at the dry cleaners |
The Easy Way Out
It might have been the cry of incompletion,
But cries dont set themselves so useless thus.
The bottom of the door was eight feet up
With no stair or ladder at its base.
A fool might break his neck to take this way,
But they werent walking in the air that day.
They were on the ground contemplating doors.
No one would be worse off to say the words
That no divinity had placed that point
Of exit at so awkward of a height,
But man had done as always sure to do:
To place an exit or an entrance where
Only a solid wall was meant to be.
A tarp that served as window for the wall
Mocked tide to swell or whither with the wind.
The swell was set to push fools out the door;
A suck was set to keep the same fools in.
Where the fools were wont to go was for the wind.
They mostly chose to take an exit where
There should have only been a wall before.
The mysteries of Egypt are so few
Compared to why we build so many doors.
| On January 7th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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very interesting |
| On May 21st 2007 neomud Said : | |
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tell your brother his style (although perhaps a bit shaky) is impeccable. His imagery is superb, including the undercurrents of imagery. The impied ideas wrap and tie quite nicely. |
| On May 20th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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Beautiful. It had an air of modern Shakespeare whilst readin it. Loved it. |
| On May 14th 2007 deadpoet Said : | |
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really nice |


