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concrete |
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with the death of the leaves |
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gwen |
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untitled |
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its good for me |
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ode to my husband |
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procrastination |
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The Easy Way Out |
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identity |
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Scars |
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The flight of the shredded butterfly |
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just because |
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Her Hymn |
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ode to my husband
from the moment i met you
i knew you were mine forever.
The way you touch me sends fire through my soul
You have the most annoying shit eating grin.
I often wonder what it would be like to smash your mouth in.
no man that has ever touched me, had me, loved me or looked at me can hold a candle to you
In the years we were not together while making love with another i had to imagine your face if i had any chance of orgasm.
You argue a point you know is incorrect
Why the fuck do you do that? Whats wrong with you?
One day we were eating dinner and i looked at you and our daughter and felt my life was complete, thank you for everything.
At night when you snore i want to punch you in the face in hopes i will unblock your bastard nose. instead i kick you in the shin.
you are the love of my life, and always will be
you are an asshole
you are a true friend to anyone who knows you
you are a fucking narcissist
you are the best of fathers
you are selfish
you are a resilient man
you are a little emotional baby that never shuts up
you are perfect
go fuck yourself
i love you
| On January 15th 2008 vernathome Said : | |
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not sure if it was the best worst thing or the worst best thing but I enjoyed it very much please keep posting them.
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| On August 14th 2007 nickandfallon Said : | |
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What's funny, is that this is how i feel about ym husband sometimes! There is a very thin line between love and hate, and your poem proves that. Great job! |
| On May 23rd 2007 babyducknc Said : | |
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that was great, I feel that way to my boyfriend |
| On May 9th 2007 SeekterBeeker Said : | |
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ha! |
| On May 3rd 2007 elexishumphrey Said : | |
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That's hilarious! Ironically...given your past, if you have never heard the song "Daddy" by Jewell, you have GOT to listen to it! I used to play it constantly as a child and still do quite often...listen to it and let me know what you think ;) |
| On April 19th 2007 dragonslilbit Said : | |
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i love it cute sound like you have a good relationship with your hubbby |
| On March 23rd 2007 marinenick Said : | |
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that is great. |
| On March 2nd 2007 diet7up Said : | |
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that's good funny and i know him and i know some of that's ture lol |
| On March 2nd 2007 jac41190 Said : | |
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hahah...i love it, you and your husband must have an extremely fun relationship, that is reflected in this poem...at first i was like WTF, but i caught on quickly...lol |
| On March 1st 2007 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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haha i like it |
| On March 1st 2007 mrspina Said : | |
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R.O.T.F.L!!!!!! that HELERIUZ! i think hell like it! itll deff bring a smile to his face ^.^ |


