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Created on 1-1-07
I was new to this. I was young and you were not born. I wanted a sign that i had what it took to be responsible for you, no mistakes. Then you kicked through me. Little flickering drumbeat thumps. The very awareness of the presence of your stretching feet, kicked life into me, doubt away from me.
I am no longer new to this. I have worries plaguing me. Unanswered questions and realizations- wrecking the very surface of me. Then one day we were sitting in our new car, The music tricks you to slam your growing feet, into the back of my seat. a reminder, Can something this simple make mommy feel undefeated, optimistic and complete?
I look forward to my life
and the many ways you will kick the reality back in.
Please Login to post comments| On December 24th 2007 claude54130 Said : | |
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You speak from your heart. Nice job! |
| On February 15th 2007 Jizzlenator Said : | |
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This is really well written and powerful. |
| On January 31st 2007 noname14 Said : | |
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Wow! This is pretty good. Actually this is really good... it's full of such emotion and feeling... it sounds to me like you're going to be a great mother. Congradulations!
~Chelsea |
