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Created:
11/27 2006
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452
Category:
Love
My Poems
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concrete |
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27
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with the death of the leaves |
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gwen |
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18
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untitled |
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its good for me |
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22
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ode to my husband |
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16
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procrastination |
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15
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The Easy Way Out |
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identity |
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Scars |
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The flight of the shredded butterfly |
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24
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just because |
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Her Hymn |
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plastics make it possible |
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pressing business at the dry cleaners |
gwen
through the salt and pepper curls, i made tangles with my little hands. Perched on the back of our sturdy chair, softened with a padded cushion.
My knobby tomboy knees pressed against mom's shoulders. A woman so beautiful that her magnificent name, and her heart that failed never deserved her
and now
Over the slight, sunhued buds of her hair, i run my worn hands- nails gnawed and stripped to the quick. Realizing the obligation of something delicate.
She has to live out my good intentions
my little girl
a lady so beautiful, her mother who panics, and her magnificent name, will never deserve her.
and that same chair-- barely stands
Please Login to post comments| On January 19th 2009 max5892 Said: |
| O.O interesting... |
| On December 24th 2007 claude54130 Said: |
| Beautiful! :) |
| On September 30th 2007 Purpledcow Said: |
| That is very beautiful! |
| On April 26th 2007 mrskritter Said: |
| I realy like it good job |
| On April 19th 2007 dragonslilbit Said: |
| I love it very good check out my poem when you get a chance |
| On March 16th 2007 medestigo Said: |
| There's a lot more than these words, and you've been able to show it all within these rows. That is a wonderful skill that, however, someone cannot use because of a missing heart. You've got both, I'm happy for you :) |
| On February 15th 2007 ralicia Said: |
| So sweet. You obviously have an intelligent mind |
| On December 21st 2006 Aoxomoxoa Said: |
| this is so beautiful. i love the imagery. |
| On December 19th 2006 crash101 Said: |
| Really good... I liked that one a lot |
| On December 12th 2006 vivikan07 Said: |
| this is sweet i like it a lot |
| On December 12th 2006 LordKrump Said: |
| I like this one. As you know I am not a big fan of free verse. But this one is sweet. |
| On December 2nd 2006 Raventears87 Said: |
| Thats really good! i like it! |
| On November 27th 2006 butifulblueyes Said: |
| good job!
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| On November 27th 2006 500nets Said: |
| i named my daughter after my mother and i wrote this for my daughter when she was 2 |
