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plastics make it possible
I noticed something, in the structure of a wall
A faux stone mask that concealed only glue and styrofoam filling of an assumed solid building.
it seemed the whole thing would crumble- and it probably will, now that i have taken notice.
The world is in disarray
now that we have built our lives this way.
I noticed something about your face.
your lipo chin, and your botoxed eyes
mr potato head, i hope it makes you feel younger too.
Our genuine emotions- treated by narcotics
Our understanding- labeled and put on a shelf
Our love- locked away, and priced- defined as liberal
Our fiction- torn apart, and quoted.
We are all crash test dummies driving in plastic cars.
hosting tupperware parties for latex people
murdering reality
lining our eyes and lips
and making sterile and durable our entire existence.
Please Login to post comments| On June 25th 2008 speederspider Said: |
| oh wow. Yeah that's good. I wrote a blog very similar once. I was different but same sort of viewpoints. I like this one alot:) |
| On January 15th 2008 vernathome Said: |
| great expression loved it |
| On January 15th 2008 vernathome Said: |
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| great expression loved it |
| On December 24th 2007 claude54130 Said: |
| So true. Good job |
| On December 14th 2007 gonzo4201 Said: |
| yes, it is true, especially in today's world, nothing is what it seems anymore |
| On December 3rd 2007 mydragonlord Said: |
| You have hit the nail on the head! |
| On November 20th 2007 fallenbloodxxx Said: |
| i like how this just randomly came out form a chat. better than i thought it would be. |
| On November 19th 2007 ausjo Said: |
| "the world is in disarray". Too bloody right missus! |
