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didnt know luv hurts so much/damp pillow

Views (1019) Love Created on 6-2-07 Flag
I AM SO STUPID ITS SAD,
I CANT TRY,  TOO MAD!
HOLD BACK TEARS  WIPE MY EYE,
TAKES ALL MY MIGHT NOT TO CRY,
PEOPLE PASS AND I GIVE A FAKE SMILE.
IT IS SO HARD TO HOLD IT FOR SUCH A WHILE.
HIM AND HER WALK BY HAND AND HAND
I AM SO WEEK I CANT EVEN STAND.
I FEEL HIS EYE LOOK THIS WAY
SO I QUICKLY RUN AWAY.
I MISS HIS KISSES, I MISS HIS TOUCH
I DID NOT KNOW LOVE HURTS THIS MUCH
AFTER THEY PASS I AM ALL ALONE
I GUESS IT IS TIME TO GO HOME
THEN AT LAST I START TO WEEP
I FALL TO MY DAMP PILLOW AND GO 2 SLEEP
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On June 8th 2008 xocutiepie077o Said :
xocutiepie077o aw this is so good..hey check out my poems..
On September 21st 2007 TopDogg92 Said :
TopDogg92 It is very touching :(
On September 19th 2007 lostnlove2121 Said :
lostnlove2121 it made me cry this iz how i feel all tha tym lately. itz really good n deep. keep it up
On June 8th 2007 manda36274 Said :
manda36274 it is good
On June 4th 2007 01fer Said :
01fer i like it
On June 4th 2007 xxxAngelicaxxx Said :
xxxAngelicaxxx wow this is really good
On June 4th 2007 f2daerg2i2e Said :
f2daerg2i2e that was really good i know exactly how you feel, check out my poem....especially the one titled 'alone' i just wrote it last night and need feedback
On June 4th 2007 Toaditup Said :
Toaditup very good
On June 2nd 2007 sadee309 Said :
sadee309 p.s. otherwise its good.. sad tho, sorry..
On June 2nd 2007 sadee309 Said :
sadee309 weak* and does he only have one eye?
On June 2nd 2007 jarnotti Said :
jarnotti oh i love this good job
On June 2nd 2007 Jesz92 Said :
Jesz92 Very touching.. so pure.. damn it why love's always like this.. but i love ur poem though..it's great!!
On June 2nd 2007 tosad2care Said :
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This is really really great!!!
On June 2nd 2007 mllrcremer Said :
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wow that was absoulutly great!!
On June 2nd 2007 numba1chic Said :
numba1chic wow.. this hit home i love it, your so talented
On June 2nd 2007 nateg0022 Said :
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this is very very good!!!!!!!better than mine
On June 2nd 2007 vsghdfhyeaur Said :
vsghdfhyeaur wow that was really deep.......nice work kudos!
On June 2nd 2007 MzGhettoness Said :
MzGhettoness this poem is totalli crackin...and deep
On June 2nd 2007 TDOG1 Said :
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Wow I really feel you on this poem
On June 2nd 2007 crotchrotwedgy Said :
crotchrotwedgy great poem, I agree with the crowd below - 8|
On June 2nd 2007 CaliLollipop16 Said :
CaliLollipop16 i know exactly how you feel. this is a great poem
On June 2nd 2007 Univarsity Said :
Univarsity I can definately relate. You should check out my poem Love Hurts.
On June 2nd 2007 sxcifairy Said :
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omg dat is so beautiful u wudnt believ ow i can so relate 2 dis its quite scary.bravo!!
On June 2nd 2007 PRiiSCiiLLA Said :
PRiiSCiiLLA omg that is so good. [: i love it. i so can relate.
On June 2nd 2007 DarkSilvan Said :
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very nice... its sad how many people go through this type of thing... Let the tears fall, let ur wounds bleed... Your tears will dry and the blood flow away... but you will always have the scars... Just try and pull what little you can from that situation and help other people through similar ones.