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bottled up inside :""( |
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he was there |
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he ran away wit the pieces |
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Her and Him:( |
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didnt know luv hurts so much/damp pillow |
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Her and Him:(
I try to tell myself he's only a boy
but when i see him i fill with joy
The things I do for him are kinda' lame
I save his messages just to see his name
and when we get in our stupid fights
It gets so hard, I cant sleep at night
Then i saw him dancing with her
My heart was ill and there was no cure
My friends tell me hes stupid and never mattered
but my heart is still completely shattered
I keep replaying the moments we had together
he made me belive we would last forever
but no those were just a bunch of lies
because he stares at her with those deep blue eyes
then i break down and start to weep
The pain to my heart will never sleep
When i close my eyes i see her and him
I start to go weeker. My world goes dim
Now i just sit and stare at the phone
with my broken heart i am all alone:(
| On December 13th 2007 TopDogg92 Said : | |
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wow you are really good with words
I loved it |
| On June 10th 2007 LostLoverGrl Said : | |
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i cried :'( its like u took the words right out of my own heart |
| On June 7th 2007 f2daerg2i2e Said : | |
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yea i no how hard it must be for you rite now |
| On June 3rd 2007 xxlostsoul14xx Said : | |
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aww that's really good. & sad. |
| On June 2nd 2007 numba1chic Said : | |
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wow....... wow i loved this!!!! i feel that way,,, :( |
| On June 2nd 2007 CaliLollipop16 Said : | |
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this is deep and i can relate to how you feel i mean kuz everyone has been there and if they havent then they will one day....nice job |
| On June 2nd 2007 PRiiSCiiLLA Said : | |
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dang you are a good poet. i suck. haha. i liek this one a lot. [: |
| On June 2nd 2007 rokmisox26 Said : | |
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omg, this was so deep... i loved it tho |
| On May 2nd 2007 pinkpanther4nc Said : | |
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you have a knack for rhyming that you're only born with:] ps: thanx for my first ever comment!!! |
| On April 27th 2007 uthorn10 Said : | |
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really good poem it hits home!!!! |
| On April 27th 2007 joce06 Said : | |
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I luv this poem, it was real sad & showed alot of deep emotions. I think, matter fact I know that if he has some1 else & he has no feelin's 4 him then the best thin' 2 do is look the other way. Sooner or later u have 2 let him go its like that sayin' if u luv somethin' let it go & if it doesn't come back 2 u then it wasn't urs 2 begin wit. |
| On April 27th 2007 ilovebestie Said : | |
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wow this is amazing!!!! i love it! good job! |
| On April 27th 2007 JessicAngel Said : | |
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really good....i loved it! |
| On April 25th 2007 kjoy428 Said : | |
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this is a really good poem. u have real talent. |
| On April 25th 2007 kohanie Said : | |
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u hav talent |
| On April 25th 2007 soinlove83 Said : | |
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wow that's really good! |
| On April 25th 2007 yippeegrl Said : | |
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that was very good...gosh it kinda makes me stop and think....gosh...its kinda depressing too..:[ |
| On April 25th 2007 jmh1011 Said : | |
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i really luv this it is great work!! |
| On April 25th 2007 zinnie Said : | |
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i really love this peom it is very deep and meaning full. you have talent! |
| On April 25th 2007 bab12570 Said : | |
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this is a good poem
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| On April 25th 2007 nikkilulu Said : | |
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wow that is very deep that is how i kinda feel right now i mean that is good but u are in love hun dont let him slip away no matter what ur friends say if he is what u want then go for it never let him go because once u do u can never get it back so litsen to me when i saw hang on to him for life or regret u didnt thats all i have to say |


