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the courus to the song i wrote for my exRate this Poem
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bottled up inside :""( |
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he was there |
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he ran away wit the pieces |
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Her and Him:( |
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didnt know luv hurts so much/damp pillow |
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Im sorry mom |
he ran away wit the pieces
he took my heart,
tore it apart,
and then ran away with the pieces
my heart still belongs to him,
because he ran away,
ran away.
ran away with the pieces! </3
| On June 10th 2007 LostLoverGrl Said : | |
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i can relate, and i really do like it! |
| On April 8th 2007 idolsforever Said : | |
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i find this really simple. nice rhythmn... but the only problem is its too original. keep up the work! finsish this piece! |


