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bottled up inside :""(

Views (118) Anger Created on 4-4-07 Flag


He messed with me like i was some kind of game,

And i swear i have gone completely insane.

My thoughts of him send a tear down my check.

and when i talk to him i cant even speak.

I try to erase him from my mind,

but a man like that is one of a kind.

I still like him after what he has done,

and my heart still thinks that hes the one.

He passes me wit his new girl

when there together, i almost hurl

she will never hav feelings for him like me,

a caring girlfriend she could never be.

Oh how i wish to tell **** just  i feel

but i am scared to see how he will deal

and if he takes me for some kinda joke

i would be sorry i ever spoke.

So my feelings for him i will hide.

just keep it bottled up inside

And even though he will never know,

my love for him i wont let go.

I cry because hes already gone

But my heart will keep hanging on

My min and soul i will try to mend

but for this poem this is the end.

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On June 15th 2007 NaomiElizabeth Said :
NaomiElizabeth wow nice job on this I can relate
On June 10th 2007 LostLoverGrl Said :
LostLoverGrl yes, we do have a lot in common, dont we...greatt poem!
On June 2nd 2007 numba1chic Said :
numba1chic i can so relate. and you wrote it down amazingly. props to you
On April 5th 2007 xxlostsoul14xx Said :
xxlostsoul14xx I really like this because I can relate to it. It sucks. & you did a good job expressing all the emotions, tres bien! ♥
On April 5th 2007 lala2463 Said :
lala2463 i've been through this before also, you did a really good job of bringing all the emotions together using words (which is sometimes really difficult to do).
On April 5th 2007 Purp7eFi7th Said :
Purp7eFi7th aww nice work.. i've been through this before : X it sucks : /
On April 4th 2007 pinkpanther4nc Said :
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i thought it's really good, you really embodied the total horror it is when it's over for him, but not for you. I really loved it, good work. :]