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dear father
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Created on 2-18-07
Dear father,
did you ever really love me
You never seamed to show it
I know you told me that you did
But how am I supposed to know its not just another lie
A lie you told me so I would cry again
you have lied to me before
like when you said it was last time you would ever hit my mom
and when you said you would never make me cry again
so how do I know
You really loved me and
your not lying to me when you said you love me
If u really loved me
why would you make me cry and then just leave me there with no one
if you really loved me like you said you have been there for me when I need you
You would have remembered my birthday
You would have remembered what I like to do and like to eat
do you really love me or are you just telling me this to keep me form crying again
Father do you love me??
did you ever really love me
You never seamed to show it
I know you told me that you did
But how am I supposed to know its not just another lie
A lie you told me so I would cry again
you have lied to me before
like when you said it was last time you would ever hit my mom
and when you said you would never make me cry again
so how do I know
You really loved me and
your not lying to me when you said you love me
If u really loved me
why would you make me cry and then just leave me there with no one
if you really loved me like you said you have been there for me when I need you
You would have remembered my birthday
You would have remembered what I like to do and like to eat
do you really love me or are you just telling me this to keep me form crying again
Father do you love me??
Please Login to post comments| On October 13th 2007 MichaelS89 Said : | |
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I know what I'm saying when I say, This sucks. My father walked out on me, my mom, my sister, and brother when I was 14. Life sucks not to have a dad. It doesn't feel so good when someone says they love you and then lie about it. My dad never hit my mom. If he did, I would have gotten mad and yelled at him. |
| On October 13th 2007 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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aw i know where ur comin from on this. my mom n dad split a couple years ago. n i havent seen or heard from him since jan. my mom has seen him n he dont want my graduation pic or nothin. she told him i was preggo n he didnt even care =[ i used to be his lil girl but eh. now he just like left |
| On February 20th 2007 3Leona3 Said : | |
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This is amazing, if only I could say all this to my Dad. I wrote a poem about him, not sure if you've seen it. But this is amazing =) |
