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in his shadow
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Created on 2-16-07
In his shadow
I live in his shadow
But no more
No more will I have to fight for the respect I deserve
No more will I have to try to get the trust I need to have
I will not try to justify what he did when he was young
I will never do what he did
I just want to get out
Out of his shadow
I Will fight for the attention I need and deserve
Its not all about him
He’s not the only one who has a life
I have a life to
I want to do all the things he got to do
But no I cant I’m just punished for the mistakes he made
Im never going to be him
don’t hold me to his mistakes
I want to live out side his shadow
You said u messed up with him
Well think are you messing up on me by never letting me experience life
Never giving me the chance to make a mistake and learn
Will you ever let me out of his shadow
If you wont I will
I live in his shadow
But no more
No more will I have to fight for the respect I deserve
No more will I have to try to get the trust I need to have
I will not try to justify what he did when he was young
I will never do what he did
I just want to get out
Out of his shadow
I Will fight for the attention I need and deserve
Its not all about him
He’s not the only one who has a life
I have a life to
I want to do all the things he got to do
But no I cant I’m just punished for the mistakes he made
Im never going to be him
don’t hold me to his mistakes
I want to live out side his shadow
You said u messed up with him
Well think are you messing up on me by never letting me experience life
Never giving me the chance to make a mistake and learn
Will you ever let me out of his shadow
If you wont I will
Please Login to post comments| On October 13th 2007 MichaelS89 Said : | |
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This was awesome. I like it a lot. Deep. Way deep. :) |
| On August 30th 2007 3Leona3 Said : | |
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You are incredibly taleted. I can really relate to this and all of your work...its brilliant |
| On March 31st 2007 drowningnlove Said : | |
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I like this one...well done |
| On February 21st 2007 chicawhatwhatb Said : | |
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Good poem :D |
| On February 16th 2007 YerFuckinMomma Said : | |
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This is amazingly awesome. I feel the same way with my older brother. Good job :D |
