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i was just sad and board so i wrote it

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if time stood still

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If only time stood still

If only time stood still  for just one moment
We could look in to each others eyes and say good bye
Good bye to the life we lived
And hello to the life we will now lead
If only time stood still  for just one moment
It could have been different
We could have lead a life filled with happiness and joy
Not a life filled with pain and sorrow
If only time stood still for just one moment
It would all be ok
If only time stood still for just one moment
We could just stop and hold the ones we love and melt in to our new life
A life filled new beings and new pains
If only we stopped to enjoy what we have and what is to come
Just stop time in its tracks and never let of what we have and what we want to have

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On October 13th 2007 MichaelS89 Said :
MichaelS89 PERFECT! Just.. wow. I liked a lot. :)
On October 13th 2007 morbidangel585 Said :
morbidangel585 great poem. love how u put it =]
On July 8th 2007 xplasticgirlx Said :
xplasticgirlx your really good
On March 31st 2007 drowningnlove Said :
drowningnlove very beautiful
On March 31st 2007 ivy81 Said :
ivy81 nice^^
On February 20th 2007 muffinpuffin Said :
muffinpuffin i like it....
On February 20th 2007 numbbbb0z Said :
numbbbb0z "i think you need to learn how to write poetry" - The only thing I see with this poem is that it doesn't rhyme, which is perfectly alright. Because not ALL poetry has to rhyme. I liked this :) Dare I say...say...Ooooh my lawdy lawd I can't say teheeeheeheee but I relate to ittttt and I like it. Awlawt.
On February 18th 2007 2xoxashleyxox2 Said :
2xoxashleyxox2 so LilPrinc u think i need to learn how to wright poems well let me tell u what i think i think u need put learn to wright poems so u can put some up and u need to learn that if ur going to someone else's page to see there work that if u don't have anything nice to say then keep it to ur self
On February 16th 2007 LilPrinc Said :
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i think you need to learn how to write poetry
On February 16th 2007 princessruth9 Said :
princessruth9 i love this poem
On February 16th 2007 Dafferz Said :
Dafferz i think that its kool. theres a sweet message in it. i think that its adorable. :o)
On February 16th 2007 YourGirl013 Said :
YourGirl013 I like this poem, its different. and thats y i like it!! =o)
On February 16th 2007 petersonk8907 Said :
petersonk8907 be-u-tee-full
On February 16th 2007 laura1202 Said :
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it makes perfect sense nobody ever thinks how the time flies by and wut we make of it
On February 16th 2007 iloveskating12 Said :
iloveskating12 it's good
On February 16th 2007 3Leona3 Said :
3Leona3 I like the message in this poem =)