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I Wanna Tell You
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Created on 10-7-07
I wanna tell you
I wanna tell you how i feel
But my words are to real
They just might kill you
And thats not what I wanna do
So I'll stay in a silent state
I wanna say i love you but its to late
Now I have to go on alone
Face the world on my own
I wanna know where i went wrong
I though this love was lifelong
I guess i was wrong
Lets just our separate ways
We will meet one of these days
When we do Just remember
it was you who ended it
I wanna tell you how i feel
But my words are to real
They just might kill you
And thats not what I wanna do
So I'll stay in a silent state
I wanna say i love you but its to late
Now I have to go on alone
Face the world on my own
I wanna know where i went wrong
I though this love was lifelong
I guess i was wrong
Lets just our separate ways
We will meet one of these days
When we do Just remember
it was you who ended it
Please Login to post comments| On October 15th 2007 Wyldemiller Said : | |
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Great flow and feeling to it :) |
| On October 13th 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said : | |
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I LOVE that this rhymes! I love the way it's worded, I love the idea, and I love that this is RAW emotion. I like that even though it sounds bitter, it's simply that you're moving on. I love it!!!! :D |
| On October 7th 2007 ashleyvargo123 Said : | |
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wow that is good
did that happend to you
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