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i miss you
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Created on 8-11-07
you're so far away
but it feels like you're right here next to me
i can still remember our last kiss
the sweet taste of you're lips on mine
i can still feel the last time you held me
with you're warm safe arms
i can still hear the last time you said you loved me
it replays in my head over and over
i still think about when i lay down at night
i see you're face in my dreams
i can't wait tell i get to see you once more
i count the days away
i can wait to be back in you're arms
where i belong
i miss so terribly baby
i miss you more then anyone will ever know
but it feels like you're right here next to me
i can still remember our last kiss
the sweet taste of you're lips on mine
i can still feel the last time you held me
with you're warm safe arms
i can still hear the last time you said you loved me
it replays in my head over and over
i still think about when i lay down at night
i see you're face in my dreams
i can't wait tell i get to see you once more
i count the days away
i can wait to be back in you're arms
where i belong
i miss so terribly baby
i miss you more then anyone will ever know
Please Login to post comments| On August 22nd 2007 MidnightRush91 Said : | |
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Very good, your emotions stand above all else in it, but I think a bit mor imagery would be nice.
I like imagery haha. |
