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Created on 1-14-07
thinkin back to just last year
we were the best of friends
but now your gone and i never got to tell
how much i love that smile
you gave me all the while
i was hiding my dieing love
Please Login to post comments| On January 14th 2007 clay6618 Said : | |
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I agree very heartfelt, even though it is short. |
| On January 14th 2007 babeabeez Said : | |
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Actually this is a really good poem. you miss spelled dying though....don't fret I'm not that great at spelling either. I do love the poem though. Very heartfelt. |
