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to my momRate this Poem
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I'm through |
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Which one? |
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Why?????? |
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if only |
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thinkin of you |
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i am |
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into me |
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Labels |
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Break free |
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Hope |
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The Best Thing Ever |
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Thanks |
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Reality |
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R.I.P. |
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I miss you! |
Why??????
Why did you run away
when all you had to do was obey
why did you choose him
over your own children
why did you take me away from my family and friends
the ones who have carried me through all that i have been
why was my life such a hassle
you never wanted me before
everything i wanted to do was to hard for you
why did you let him take the place of me
i thought i was your one and only
why did you choose crime over happiness
i hated looking over my shoulder
but now that i'm free of you
i never have to see your face again
i can sit and ask why you did these things to me
without being scared i'll get beat
cause i'm free from a house of hate
free from a life of crime
free from being scared of cops
and now to being friends
now i can ask you why
without being scared i'll cry
cause my opinion should have counted
in a time like that
you never asked or would listen
WHY??????
everything i tried to say
was me being ungratefull to you
i'm sick of your attitude
nothings ever your fault
well this time everything is
you can't deny it anymore
you shut the open door
but i'm free from your house of hate
it can't hurt me anymore
i'm free from a life of crime
hated it anyway
i'm free to sit and ask
WHY??????
why did you take me away
when al you had to do was obey
why did you choose him
over your own children
why did you take me away from my family and friends
the ones who have carried me through all i have been
why was my life such a hassle
but most of all just
WHY??????
| On April 3rd 2007 purplecouch Said : | |
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This is truely powerful. It's gripping, meaningful, not just a rant. I love it. |
| On January 15th 2007 luvsuma Said : | |
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sicko |
| On January 14th 2007 RockerGirl16 Said : | |
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wow thats strong!!!!!!!! |
| On January 14th 2007 clay6618 Said : | |
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Yeah wow. I hope this didn't really happen. |
| On January 14th 2007 BhamLidey Said : | |
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wow |


