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i took the memories i had of you ,

kissed them goodbye but still,

crying on the inside,

waiting for you to want me,

and wanting the crashing tears to stop,

crying myself to sleep,

is just what i got,

life is not fair,

nor is my rotting heart.

 

 

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On February 28th 2007 babygirl080990 Said :
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I do like the poem but the end came to a stop quickley
On February 11th 2007 XxXelmoXxX Said :
XxXelmoXxX that title is a lyric in the song. use more meaning.=]
On December 4th 2006 doomeddog Said :
doomeddog this is an alright poem just try to make your words stronger
On December 4th 2006 thepurnells Said :
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well, sorry to be harsh but this is one of the weakest poems Ive read...
On December 4th 2006 bigkim Said :
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true so know how u feeel
On December 3rd 2006 loveme96 Said :
loveme96 omg thats soo good
On December 3rd 2006 nitedemon Said :
nitedemon i love that poem plz dont stop writing them i know how it feels to once be in love
On December 3rd 2006 missqt Said :
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TRUE,TRUE.....
On December 3rd 2006 CupidChokehold Said :
CupidChokehold really good
On December 3rd 2006 ErinRochelle21 Said :
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This poem is awesome, i know that feeling... <333 Erin
On December 3rd 2006 kammerz123 Said :
kammerz123 =)
On December 3rd 2006 hyperchik62 Said :
hyperchik62 hmm...it's nice it makesyo think you should check out some ofmy poems. i think you might like tham ~*jessica*~
On December 3rd 2006 misscassidayyy Said :
misscassidayyy hey i like this poem its good but very sad
On December 3rd 2006 LJS2004 Said :
LJS2004 omg i like the poem i've felt that way one time :(