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I simply wrote... |
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So hard to do nothing
Who knew it would be so hard to do nothing
So many things I could do, so many things I want to do
But all she wants is nothing
Nothing to happen nothing to change
Nothing but the world to stay the same
Who knew it would be so hard to do nothing
The things I should do
The things that would happen if I did
But all she keeps saying is "nothing should happen
nothing needs to be done, leave it how it is"
But how can I do nothing when it feels so wrong
Like I've been cheated out of something
Something must be done
When the time comes she will understand
She will forgive me for what will be done
For I can not just do nothing for some thing has already been done
| On October 22nd 2007 ynot4u2hold Said : | |
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all it takes for evil to succeed is for good men & women to do nothing. I love this poem. This is one of the best poems I've read so far. It's almost as good as the poem you wrote "You Paw At My Heart" I love them both. |
| On October 22nd 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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I can kind of relate...I like that the situation is vague, so it's easier to identify with...I also really like the repetition of the word "nothing." |


